Is this a creative way to celebrate our companies first year anniversary?

My wife and I are still infants in our pursuits of business success together, however we feel we hit a homerun with this ingenuitive commercial concept we produced to release in commemoration of our first year in business. Obviously, we would absolutely love some feedback...because we think this is incredible, but means nothing without a collective input from other business owners.



We thought that if we showed the bare bones "making of" behind the scenes video to show how we created it, it would allow others to grasp our marketing premise, and our dynamic together as a husband and wife team.
Creative Doorway | Parallel Universe Commercial Website

Thoughts??