Can someone give me some critique on my bullet points.
I've been trying to distinguish feature vs benefit and my head is about to explode.
Can you give me some pointers to rewrite these into understandable benefits? Also the first action work, seems too repetitive. What do you guys think?
- Save more money by only paying for the coverage you choose
- Save time and frustration because we will do all the work
- Get help with problems, by having an expert with you every step of the way
- Get your best interests first, always, we represent you
- Get the best price by allow the insurance companies to bid for your business.
I've been trying to distinguish feature vs benefit and my head is about to explode.
Can you give me some pointers to rewrite these into understandable benefits? Also the first action work, seems too repetitive. What do you guys think?
- Save more money by only paying for the coverage you choose
- Save time and frustration because we will do all the work
- Get help with problems, by having an expert with you every step of the way
- Get your best interests first, always, we represent you
- Get the best price by allow the insurance companies to bid for your business.
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