How to make a squeeze page ?

I,m a new Internet Marketing, I'm working in the affiliate market with ClickBank, I've made a squeeze page to build my list and I've been uploaded it to my host since a moth, please check it here (tahlawy.com) and tell me why it's not working well to grow my list? and tell me if I can make a better one more effective to build my list? and how I can make it?

If any one have an idea to make the work in affiliate marketing more easier and better please provide it, I have some ideas I can share them with you too.

Thank You!